I admire anyone who can be more productive in the morning than pulling on clothes, eating breakfast and managing not to trip on the way out the door. Mornings are terrible.
Almost three pages longhand re-writing the end of a scene to take out the melodrama but add a wee bit that will be... not important later, but is a small piece of a pattern that will be important later.
Next scene is a relic of the very different original draft of this thing and I originally shoved it in there with a sledgehammer. Now I need to clean up the mess (and take out even *more* melodrama).
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Date: 2020-04-15 03:43 am (UTC)Almost three pages longhand re-writing the end of a scene to take out the melodrama but add a wee bit that will be... not important later, but is a small piece of a pattern that will be important later.
Next scene is a relic of the very different original draft of this thing and I originally shoved it in there with a sledgehammer. Now I need to clean up the mess (and take out even *more* melodrama).